Score: 7

"Ehh..."

submission: Peoplemation Collection 2

date: August 1, 2008

Ehh, average, but I could have gone without you doing that scream thing right after the preloader. That scared the sh** out of me. But, very good stop motion!

Score: 2

"Well..."

submission: Super Mouse Game

date: August 1, 2008

Opinion: This game was on the verge of being terrible. The brush tool was definitely used, but not very good, and easy to cheat, either moving the mouse with a fast movement, or doing the right click method many reviewers here have noticed.

Recommendations: Try making the cursor a small dot that is a color very separate for all the other colors. Even make the cursor flash if you must. Also, don't be afraid to use the line tool! Just as long as you thicken the lines nicely so you can't easily run over them. And, make the framerate at 120 so no matter how fast you move, you can't fly over a line. And add more color. This submission was extremely bland, and not very exciting. Also, place buttons that give you the ability to start and stop the music. Maybe even have multiple music choices. There are many tutorials that can help you with this kind of stuff.

Score: 10

"Oh lolol..."

submission: House of 1000 Cats

date: July 30, 2008

2girls1cup was DISGUSTING...

But kitty likes. So its all good. Very good animation though!!

Score: 6

"Umm..."

submission: Tengu Dress Up 1.6

date: July 27, 2008

Not to be too hurtful, but that wasn't very good. All the other reviewers don't seem to realize anything about how the graphics are somewhat iffy and the button problem. The reviewer below has found this problem, but doesn't understand that it is not a glitch. it is an error in the ActionScript. Actually, there is no ActionScript. So why not just take that button away? And please don't point me out that you mentioned all about this in your description. I know. Please do look into basic ActionScript tutorials or please ask some Flash masters like MindChamber, seeing that he is the only one that replies. I do understand the music quality part, I have that happen to me too with most music. Overall this game is a little below average, but I can see that you tried. So I give you 6 stars.

P.S.

Try putting this code on that stop all music button:

on(press){
stop();
stopAllSounds();
}

So yeah, helpin' you out bro :)

Score: 9

"Good..."

submission: Dad 'n Me

date: July 14, 2008

A truly epic game. Though you need to add the ability to have lives, so we don't friggin' die after we got so far and have to start ALL OVER.

Score: 9

"Very good!"

submission: Apples and Oranges

date: July 14, 2008

Very spooky and mysterious with a twist of humor. I liked how you didn't show the blood where the husband bites the wife, thanks. We don't need any more gore for a while is my opinion. Though your speaking was slow, they talked a bit spaced out, but I did like your detail in both movement and no movement. Lastly, I liked how the image of what the main character saw would flicker about so we could see what he saw. Like when the wife turned into an apple for half a second. Good ideas, animating, and good overall. 9 stars.

-Pixellator

Score: 8

"Star Review."

submission: my profession is dick lic

date: July 11, 2008

Short, though pretty good. The movements were pretty original, 4 stars for that, there were nice clear sounds, 5 stars for that, but I recommend one thing. Please do NOT do the guard standing outside the door and the main character comes around the corner and kills him. That is becoming too ofter and everyone is making a habit of it. We need to stop that. Minus 1 star.

4+5-1=8 Stars.

Score: 8

"My Opinions"

submission: Bytesize

date: July 4, 2008

There were many famous artists portrayed in this submission, though I would like to state a few things from my own archive:

I do like the Bytesize idea, but this submission was really unnecessary. Really, why not just post up a link to the front page, telling us to look for Bytesize in the higher middle section of the main page? Though, I do like how you made the SWF screen larger so we could view detail more intricately.

Also, there were many artists that were, really, unknown at first. Their only large appearance was when they posted their little animation fragment to Bytesize. Take, for instance, Cody Glaiel (High-Off-Cheese). His submissions were really not too well known. Oh, but there are more...

Mad-Mardigan
KwikToon
Paper-Penguin
Mieshka

And to anyone else, there may just be more. But I guess it is a good idea to introduce new Flash authors to the Newgrounds community.

Overall, I give you 8 stars. 4/5 Voting.

Score: 9

"Good!"

submission: Platforms City

date: July 3, 2008

Pretty awesome, but requires much precision jumping as you must maneuver through crowds of enemies that can kill you if you get within an inch of them.

9/10
5/5

Score: 10

"Awesome tutorial!"

submission: RPG Tutorial The Basics

date: June 30, 2008

Okay Sader101, those colors aren't that blinding, so don't over-react about that. And as you may notice, idiot, the title of this submission is RPG tutorial, not creator. Don't just pick any random Flash to look at and title it whatever you want. Use your eyes.

Also, your submission (StaticBlaze) was very informative and helped me construct the basis of a RPG I wanted to create. Thank you and awesome tutorial!