To tell you the truth...
Unfortunately, I muts say that I see no reason why TomFulp found this game so interesting that he put it on the front page. Here are a few reasons:
1. The first level was even hard. Seriously.
2. It was hard to reach the vehicles when useless brown boulders were in the way. Accidentally grabbing the stupid oversized rock depletes time, which you barely even have on the first level.
3. Stacking the vehicles required perfect vehicle placement. I can't count how many times I failed at making a full pile of cars because of the pile toppling over before I completed it.
4. It was too repetitive after the first few levels, and eventually got boring.
So overall, this game isn't very good. But I can see by your Flash skills that you can make something better than this. Just please, have different objectives, rather than just collect cars and then piling thenn and compacting them.
Ugh, That was really buggy. Pretty good though.
Opinion: This game was on the verge of being terrible. The brush tool was definitely used, but not very good, and easy to cheat, either moving the mouse with a fast movement, or doing the right click method many reviewers here have noticed.
Recommendations: Try making the cursor a small dot that is a color very separate for all the other colors. Even make the cursor flash if you must. Also, don't be afraid to use the line tool! Just as long as you thicken the lines nicely so you can't easily run over them. And, make the framerate at 120 so no matter how fast you move, you can't fly over a line. And add more color. This submission was extremely bland, and not very exciting. Also, place buttons that give you the ability to start and stop the music. Maybe even have multiple music choices. There are many tutorials that can help you with this kind of stuff.
Not to be too hurtful, but that wasn't very good. All the other reviewers don't seem to realize anything about how the graphics are somewhat iffy and the button problem. The reviewer below has found this problem, but doesn't understand that it is not a glitch. it is an error in the ActionScript. Actually, there is no ActionScript. So why not just take that button away? And please don't point me out that you mentioned all about this in your description. I know. Please do look into basic ActionScript tutorials or please ask some Flash masters like MindChamber, seeing that he is the only one that replies. I do understand the music quality part, I have that happen to me too with most music. Overall this game is a little below average, but I can see that you tried. So I give you 6 stars.
Try putting this code on that stop all music button:
So yeah, helpin' you out bro :)
A truly epic game. Though you need to add the ability to have lives, so we don't friggin' die after we got so far and have to start ALL OVER.
Pretty awesome, but requires much precision jumping as you must maneuver through crowds of enemies that can kill you if you get within an inch of them.
Well... 2 will be awesome!
Okay Sader101, those colors aren't that blinding, so don't over-react about that. And as you may notice, idiot, the title of this submission is RPG tutorial, not creator. Don't just pick any random Flash to look at and title it whatever you want. Use your eyes.
Also, your submission (StaticBlaze) was very informative and helped me construct the basis of a RPG I wanted to create. Thank you and awesome tutorial!
You've helped a lot more then some people *glares below*
Awesome, but did you seriously give your own submission an award?
Awesome game! I enjoyed it to the fullest extent because there were way more options given than what Line Rider does, like different things to ride, backgrounds, and more. ------- My map (Very basic):
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Very awesome and interactive game, though its controls and actions were both delayed and too long, so long you had to wait a while before you could do anything again. And it was HARD. I can't even beat the second level on Story Mode. But over very good due to animation and graphics! Keep up the good work!
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